Good piece, though it would be easier for non-native English speakers if you included titles telling what the kids were saying at each stage. Also, be more specific with your credits - remember that you need to be able to direct someone to the page where you got an image.
Nice job! I enjoyed your topic because I think it is so important for children to realize the damaging effects of the sun. I do agree with Rushton though. I think more text will allow for my clarity in the video. Also, the use of still images may work a little better to avoid the camera moving. Once again, nice job, and good info!
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Hi Alison,
Good piece, though it would be easier for non-native English speakers if you included titles telling what the kids were saying at each stage. Also, be more specific with your credits - remember that you need to be able to direct someone to the page where you got an image.
Rushton
Nice job! I enjoyed your topic because I think it is so important for children to realize the damaging effects of the sun. I do agree with Rushton though. I think more text will allow for my clarity in the video. Also, the use of still images may work a little better to avoid the camera moving. Once again, nice job, and good info!
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